Friday, 19 June 2015

E T Reo ❄️

2 star and a wish


My goal is I book my workshops on Monday morning and attend them on time. I sometimes go to my workshops I time.

Star I did great writing by puting  myself in the pit.

Wish To respect the rules of poutama by not yelling in the break out spaces. 

Tuesday, 16 June 2015

Lives of hockey balls.

WALT: select words carefully to impact our audience
SC: verbs, nouns, adjectives, adverbs, simile. 

It was day of   big match. Every one was roaring.It felt like I was a very special ball beause all the girls were chasing me.I got slammed in the back.the goals eyes shimmered.As I light the stage. It is finally  over I won yay!!!

feedback/Feedforward I think next time you could give the reader a bit more info and explain your goal.
I like how you gave a good Walt. Louis

Evaluation I am proud of useing simile next time I want to write a longer story. 

Thursday, 11 June 2015


 Description: this week we have been doing maths. We are solving a problem using counting on and other strategies.

Write two amounts that have a sum more than $400

Feedbackfeedforward: I think you could work on showing your maths better. I can not see what you have done because the pictures are not clear enough. Good idea using show me. Show me is a great app to show your learning. Rosalind:)

Evaluation: I need to get better at skip counting in tens especially numbers bigger than a hundred.I want to do it by week 10 I can use money and blocks to count in tens to hundred.

Tuesday, 2 June 2015

tic tac toe

This year we have been doing workshops My goal is expand vocabulary when we are not in a workshop we do our tic tac toe.
Success criteria
Read on 
Base or root word
WMy said is dead poster.
Feedback great job maybe you could add more words to your said is dead. Miko

Feedforward maybe you could add more better words like cried. Miko

I think I did Good I think I am going to add more words.