Description: we were all doing writing about sea turtles but I wasn't here I was at otaki so I am writing about my village stay.
Feedback/Feedforward well done Rebecca that sounds really fun and you went really in depth with your writing next time you could make sure it all makes sense and make sure you spelt everything correctly but other than that it was a great story!
Evaluation I think I did good becase I put some depth in my writing but next time I think I should make it make sense and spelt everything correctly.
Deception: in troys c goup we have been doing repeating pattern we got giving a task to comple by lunch time here is my pattern see if you can repeating my patterns.
Here is my pattern
Feedback/Feedforward well done Rebecca it looks like you get what your doing and you are really challenging yourself.next time you could explain what a repeating pattern is so we know for sure you get what you are doing.
Evaluation I think I did good becase I challenging my seft really well but next time I could explain what repeating is.